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Post by The Only Way Out on Feb 27, 2005 2:46:41 GMT -5
YES YES YES! Er, yeah. I have gotten the prologue page for my webcomic done. I am very proud of it. Take a look? PrologueI tweaked the name from Angelic Demon to Dark Light, it sounded better.
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Post by Jennifer Babcock on Mar 2, 2005 0:02:23 GMT -5
Hey there- glad you decided to take the plunge. How often will you update?
From a glance, my only suggestion is to work on your anatomy and to also avoid using photo textures for backgrounds. I think it'd be best if you could use your own art or else touch up actual photographs w/ your own art. If you look at my cartoon from 2/28 you'll see that all I did was go over a picture of the Met with my own brushstrokes. The Met has tons of details in its architecture that I wanted to emphasize, but I also wanted it to blend in with the cartoon.
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Post by The Only Way Out on Mar 15, 2005 0:05:43 GMT -5
The first page is done. It took entirely too long. Page 1: Wha...?I did make the textures on the cover myself. They look too real.
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sneepioo
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Your legs are ugly. Plz cover them.
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Post by sneepioo on Mar 15, 2005 2:24:31 GMT -5
makes me curious you know ^_^ looking forward to the next pages
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Post by Spinaldo on Mar 16, 2005 4:16:19 GMT -5
The first page is done. It took entirely too long. Page 1: Wha...?I did make the textures on the cover myself. They look too real. Know what? I take it back. My poop would be sad on this drawing, i think i'll keep it in my ass (for now? dum dum dum!).
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sneepioo
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Your legs are ugly. Plz cover them.
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Post by sneepioo on Mar 16, 2005 12:22:42 GMT -5
you're being so nice. show us some of your stuff. proof you're better first. besides she's only 13 you know.
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Post by Spinaldo on Mar 16, 2005 21:40:55 GMT -5
you're being so nice. show us some of your stuff. proof you're better first. besides she's only 13 you know. Ok, I'll proof im better. Here's an original drawing i painted on the ceiling of a friend of mine:
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sneepioo
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Your legs are ugly. Plz cover them.
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Post by sneepioo on Mar 17, 2005 2:32:10 GMT -5
yeah dream on.
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Post by kinkykingkal on Mar 17, 2005 15:09:40 GMT -5
Ok, I'll proof im better. Here's an original drawing i painted on the ceiling of a friend of mine: By the way, thanks for painting that for me, Spinny.
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Post by Jennifer Babcock on Mar 18, 2005 0:40:56 GMT -5
I recommend putting in some more detail in your artwork not only because it's in the form of a graphic novel, but also because the page you showed me in particular had a limited number of boxes. Remember to keep working on your art until you are completely happy with it- don't ever settle.
Additionally, I recommend studying facial expressions and maybe copying work from your favorite artists. If you don't already do so, take a sketchbook wherever you go and force yourself to do at least one sketch each day.
Is there anyway to navigate between the pages more easily?
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sneepioo
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Your legs are ugly. Plz cover them.
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Post by sneepioo on Mar 18, 2005 16:27:12 GMT -5
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Post by coolc on Mar 19, 2005 23:37:27 GMT -5
Very nice for your age, if I may say so myself. I like the wall textures and shading, they do look very realistic. You also gave it a good hook, or beginning: it left me very curious as to what is going on, and I'm sure it had that same effect on many of us (quote from sneepio - makes me curious you know ^_^ looking forward to the next pages). Keep up the good work!
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Post by The Only Way Out on Apr 23, 2005 19:58:43 GMT -5
Teh SiteI spent FAR too much time on this page. This and the next will be really short. Thank you for all the comments and criticism, they help. Most of them. (Do not try any of the links, they do not work yet.)
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